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leaves tangle around
cold bodies of lost children
as a sparrow calls
cold bodies of lost children
as a sparrow calls
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"a sparrow call" might have worked better for the 3rd line, even though it would break the 5-7-5 structure...
Why were the children lost? Almost conjures images of a serial killer
Nice work.
Why were the children lost? Almost conjures images of a serial killer
Nice work.